Angel of Death

Another great chapter and I think I'm in love with Ambrose, please keep writing. The only problem that I have is that you have Chapter four but it also says ...

Wow, thanks Jesse :D :D :D

First Novel My first story was called The Chronicles of Pyra: Rise of the Phoenix (some of its posted here but it was written when I was ten, so my ...

I haven't cried in a long time Sumi, this is so beautiful. Really, your title is what intrigued me from the beginning but the way you wrote this was like ...

Hey BBB, really haven't talked to you in a while but anyways hey! Now on to this song, I loved it. Since I love music as much as I love ...

This was really beautiful, I hope you get around to adding more to this. I like the emotions you portray, its so sweet. Most guys would be afraid to express ...

The Jane Effect By Angel of Death Part 2: Honor Elizabeth closed her eyes and took a deep breath. Knowing that her family's honor was in her hands made Elizabeth's ...

Thanks for the help Jesse and Seshat. I really wouldn't have caught on to some of the things that were pointed out. Thanks again, Angel :D :D :D

The Jane Effect By Angel of Death Part 1: Ribbons Elizabeth sauntered across the lush green fields and twirled in the sun's warm breath. Dawn was coming soon, ready to ...

This was so beautiful Fallen, I really love where this is going. Its great how you weaved the prologue into the second chapter thus explaining who and what Damian is. ...

I liked the clerk/Adeline conversation before you changed it. Now it leaves me wondering "Why did Adeline act so rushed when the guy complimented her name?" Where did she have ...

I really think this has potential, it just needs a little more. I felt that this was rushed and that maybe you should slow down, give a little bit more ...

Wow Fallen this was a very powerful start, it was very sad. I really can't wait to read more.

Bravo!! I loved your ending and its nice that Calix is getting over Chad and all. You are a really good writer and I really hope you do go for. ...

Sanctum is really interesting